Work sample · Interactive demo
A credit application, redesigned around the applicant
Applying for credit is stressful. Long forms, unexplained questions, and silence after you hit submit push good applicants away and create work for your staff. This demo shows how I'd redesign that journey.
Harbor Point Lending
Personal loan application (fictional)
Personal loan application (fictional)
- Start
- About you
- Income
- Loan
- Review
About 6 minutes total
What changed
Common patterns vs. the redesign
| Common pattern | Redesigned approach |
|---|---|
| A long single page with no sense of how long it will take | Five short steps, a progress bar, and an upfront time estimate |
| Applicants find out what they need halfway through | A "before you start" checklist so nobody has to stop and come back |
| Sensitive questions with no explanation | A short "why we ask" note right where each question appears |
| Errors shown only after submit, at the top of the page | Specific, inline messages next to the field that needs fixing |
| A generic "thank you" page, then silence | A reference number, a status timeline, and proactive updates |
Each of these changes also affects operations: fewer incomplete files, fewer "where's my application?" calls, and a cleaner handoff into onboarding. That connection between the experience and the work behind it is what I map in every engagement.
Want this kind of review for your application?
I'll map where applicants drop off or stall, and what's driving it behind the scenes.